Part IWriting结构框图：第1段引入话题:校图书馆对大学生来说非常重要,应该改进服务。A Proposal onImproving LibraryService第2段具体论证:讨论图书馆服务中存在的问题,有针对性地提出解决方案。第3段表达期望:希望上述的建议会被采纳。如被采纳图书馆将迎来新的发展。范文点评:参考范文精彩点评A Proposal on Improving Library Service【1】The school library is an important resource for university study.Making full use of the academic resources in the library can benefitcollege students a lot.【2】However, it fails to meet the demands of studentsin several aspects.It is high time to improve library service.【1】介绍图书馆的重要作用。【2】使用However转折引出图书馆的不足。【3】One of students'complaints is insufficient support from librarians,especially when IT support is needed.【4】Therefore, relevant trainingcourses should be offered so that librarians can provide better and timelyhelp.【5】The second aspect is about the opening hours of our library, from8:00 am to 10:00 pm, which many students think is too short in times offinal exams and while preparing for